Re: How about this? ( For Writing II )

Hello〜, Ms.Chikuwa!
This is Takoyaki the Second, a poem-writing Japanese food.


〉Anne’s Diary
〉(English Journal４月号と、アニメの記憶で書きました。（GRは未読）
〉でも多少なりともネタばれかも？)

〉Today I came here to Avonlea.
〉I am starting a new life with Marira and Matthew.
〉I came here by train.
〉When I got off the train, I didn’t see anybody to meet me.
〉I was a little afraid. I thought I had to go back to the orphan home.
〉But Matthew came! I was really happy.
〉Matthew and I came back to this house in a wagon(だっけ？)
〉I talked and talked about myself to him.
〉I wanted Matthew to know about me well.
〉On the way I found a wonderful place.
〉 I named the place （「喜びの白い道」だっけ？）
〉I never forget the scenery through my life!
〉とかなんとか・・・

〉This may be PAKURI of Takoyaki-san’s idea because you use the book you read.
〉I’m sorry.　


The words “だっけ？” means you didn't see the original text when you wrote this?
Are most of these sentences your original?
If so, it is great and wonderful!
Someday I want to write English as you wrote here.


〉I think this is good for practicing writing if you don’t like keep a diary


Fufufufufufufu …(smiling)


〉(like me).


Hahahahahahahhahah…(laughing)


〉Every day my diary would be… “Today is the same day as yesterday〜“


Gyahahaha, Goho Goho (coughing), Gyahahaha … (explosive laughing ← It must be a Japanese English!)


〉If you think, “My life is not exciting enough for me to write on a dairy”,
〉How about this one?
〉Hero’s or Heroin’s life is exciting, of course!


Hero's or Heroin's life!
I also think your idea is wonderful.


Diary
Every day
Write and write
What's something new today?
Nothing


Happy Writing 〜♪

Hello, Takoyaki the Second-san.
This is Authentic Chikuwa, the Pakurist.

〉The words “だっけ？” means you didn't see the original text when you wrote this?
〉Are most of these sentences your original?

I don’t know if it is okay I call it my original, because I follow the facts of the story I read.

〉If so, it is great and wonderful!
〉Someday I want to write English as you wrote here.

Thanks anyway for saying so, but YOUR writing has far more originality, I suppose…
From the first place, this style is pakuri of your idea,
and in other clean words, “Your idea inspired me”

If the story is written with the view of the 1st person,
this type of writing is the very same as “Retold”,
which you suggested in other Bulletin Board Squares
I am sorry again…

Ａｎｙｗａｙ I am very looking forward your letter to the Tadokist Square
about how to write english sentences through retolding GRs and other books!

〉Fufufufufufufu …(smiling)
〉Hahahahahahahhahah…(laughing)
〉Gyahahaha, Goho Goho (coughing), Gyahahaha … (explosive laughing ← It must be a Japanese English!)

I love people’s smiling, laughing, end explosive laughing! They make me feel good…

〉〉Hero’s or Heroin’s life is exciting, of course!

〉Hero's or Heroin's life!
〉I also think your idea is wonderful.

Thank you. YOUR idea inspired me !

〉Diary
〉Every day
〉Write and write
〉What's something new today?
〉Nothing

Another nice poem ! I always like the last lines you make!

〉Happy Writing 〜♪
HAPPY WRITING !!

Hi, everybody.

I have found some (many) mistakes in my sentences
(in "For Writing 1 & 2) as I thought, but I won’t correct them!

You can ask me, “Are you really a t××er？“
BE〜♪　“Yes, I am.”

Everybody, please feel free and just try to write in English!

See you…
(Behind the curtain : Ah… Am I really a t××er...?)

Hi,there !!!

I think, uhh,, I should say, I am convinced that
Chikuwa-san must be a good t×××.
The Children in her class must be happy lucky people.
I am sure !!

MINI-MINI info
Finally, finally, our Chikuwa-san will come to Tokyo !
Please wait for an information about the GEIGEKI at TokyoSSS on Sep.11 !!
Event BBS, you can't miss it !!

By for now !