Re: I gave it a try but it was so tough!!

〉Hello, Kian-san. May is speaking.

Hello, May-san! This is Kian.
Thank you for answering me!!

I walk with Sancho, my little lovely dog.
〉 Rain or shine; even in the fog.
〉 We walk through woods in the frosty park.
〉 We walk with stars at night so dark.
〉 When I throw his ball in the field,
〉 He runs and jumps at it never to yield.
〉 He often puts his head on my laps at ease.
〉 I feel his warmness, patting him to please.

I like it very very much!!
You are a poet!

Here are my lines.
It is not so good but will you read it, please?

Miffy's Dream

Miffy is on a cloud.
It is a nice cloud.
She is floating in the sky.
She has a wonderful sight.
Where dees the cloud take Miffy?
Miffy meets Taffy.
They are facing each other.
They are floating together.
They are floating to the stars.
Now, they are playing with the stars.
Miffy and Taffy find shooting-stars.
They ride on the shooting-stars.
Oh, there is the moon.
We are coming soon.
The cresent is a slide.
They are happy and sigh.
It is getting colder.
They hold their shoulders,
Miffy and Taffy sleep happily together.

My teacer's one is much better, of course.
But he needed much time to correct mine.
So making a rhyme is very very difficult!

〉Happy holidays!!

You, too!!