I gave it a try but it was so tough!!

Hi, everyone! This is Kian.

I have a picture book without lines.
It is 'Miffy's dream'.
A few days ago, I tried to make lines for the book and to rhyme them.
It was so tough!!
I managed to make lines and showed them to my teacher.
He said ' You did so well!' and then ' If I were you I would write...'.
He and I had a long talk and he corrected them.
His lines were much better than mine, of course.
And we figured that reading rhyme was easy but writing it was difficult.
But it was good experience for me!

Happy Reading!!