Suprise! English-Haiku is 3-5-3 or 11 Syllable

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699. Suprise! English-Haiku is 3-5-3 or 11 Syllable

お名前: バナナ
投稿日: 2005/4/4(21:21)

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〉Hi, I'm ako.

Hello! Highness!

〉I'd like to try it,,,but I don't know the rule of English Haiku.
〉Is it the same with Japanese Haiku ?

I googled it,
and I found it,
and I was suprised.

I read this site.
[url:http://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm]

I quote from that site.

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When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's,
they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a
similar condition for English-language haiku. This style
is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku.
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( umum, I see )

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Over the years, however, most haiku poets in North America
have become aware that 17 English syllables convey a great
deal more information than 17 Japanese syllables
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(oh!)

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and have come to write haiku in fewer syllables,
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something in the vicinity of 11 English syllables is a
suitable approximation of 17 Japanese syllables,

As to the form, some American poets advocate writing
in 3-5-3 syllables or 2-3-2 accented beats.

This style is called by some "free-form" haiku.
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You see ?

When I read this,
I was surprised.

Very interesting!

〉For examle, now I make this.

〉SSS
〉I will enjoy
〉BBS

〉You count 5-7-5 sounds(?) on these three lines.

Your poem(?) is 3-4-3 syllables.
It is like 3-5-3.

〉More exactly saying,
〉The first line, [SSS], sounds like this → ♪・♪・♪
〉The second line,[I will enjoy] sounds → ♪・♪♪・♪・♪
〉The third line is the same as the first → ♪・♪・♪

Oh,you get it by yourself.
It is about accent-beats.

〉But this is my own inner feelings / sense.
〉I don't know it goes or not.

Your inner feeling is very genuis.

〉Is there anyone who knows about English Haiku here ?

So, I will make.
Ummmmmmm.

No1
I'm Banana,
I'm a boy-at-heart,
and a gentleman.

No2
Oh, my son!
It's difficult for you
New JUNKEN

Ummmm
I like it.

Bye-bye


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