Re: I want to write HAIKU in English on this BBS

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697. Re: I want to write HAIKU in English on this BBS

お名前: ako
投稿日: 2005/4/4(15:32)

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"バナナ"さんは[url:kb:696]で書きました:
〉Hello, This is Banana.

Hi, I'm ako.

〉I received a mail from my friend.
〉He/She made a HAIKU in it.
〉It is English.

Oh, what an interesting friend you have !

〉Oh!
〉HAIKU in English!

〉It is cool, I think.

Wow, I envy him/her !!

〉I will try it next time.

〉Somebody do it with me?

I'd like to try it,,,but I don't know the rule of English Haiku.
Is it the same with Japanese Haiku ?

For examle, now I make this.

SSS
I will enjoy
BBS

You count 5-7-5 sounds(?) on these three lines.

More exactly saying,
The first line, [SSS], sounds like this → ♪・♪・♪
The second line,[I will enjoy] sounds → ♪・♪♪・♪・♪
The third line is the same as the first → ♪・♪・♪

But this is my own inner feelings / sense.
I don't know it goes or not.

Is there anyone who knows about English Haiku here ?


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