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687. Re: Brainstormお名前: 酒井＠快読１００万語！
投稿日: 2005/3/24(00:35)
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Banana-san, let me congratulate you on your fine writing.
I believe you have your own style now---a bit like Nate's
but there's more playfulness and tenderness around the edges.
I liked it very much. Do keep up the good job!
Let me suggest to you one thing, though.
I think you can say 'boy-at-heart' instead of 'Shonen-no-kokoro',
as ' a gentleman who is a boy-at-heart', see?